I might tone down the 'nightmare' and shorten the intro a bit, maybe a background pad to ad some depth. but overall it's like I said, not bad.
When you two do this it seems like Mandi gets the lighter, more innocent side of an idea, you tend to get more of the darker side, filled with well sorrow and/or rage .
Though I regularly prefer the darker 'eviler(?)' side of a piece, Mandi's just seems to be better at using the free samples.
that's true, she's had to use them for a long while now so she's become quite creative with her sounds. Though that doesn't beat the fact hers is a well made piece!
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It makes me think of a dark confusion, not like insanity, but a calm wandering darkness. like you are traped in an unding dream of an ever-shifting maze...
I'd say that its pretty good (especially the beginning) but if you are going to have a simple repetition, it should be, a back-ground beat rather than the main sound.
Other than that it's rather good.
(Makin' a remake!)
This is simply amazing...
so far in my short time on newgrounds I have desided that you are the best...
This is my new favorite song next to The Dead's Witness.
Keep up the good work!
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